D4 A3 Question I am disagreeing of Donald trumps wall because I think it is racist because how people wanna go there and want new jobs that just what I think.
I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
You have clearly stated your opinion on the issue and have baked up your statement with a good reason. I’d love to hear you go into more detail. How do you think it will affect people who live close to the border? Or people who have family on the other side.
As you are year 8, I will also leave you with the challenge to think of ways you can your blog posts really interesting, maybe with more images or using slide shows, up to you.
I’m looking forward to seeing more amazing work from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
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Hey Uenuku,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
You have clearly stated your opinion on the issue and have baked up your statement with a good reason. I’d love to hear you go into more detail. How do you think it will affect people who live close to the border? Or people who have family on the other side.
As you are year 8, I will also leave you with the challenge to think of ways you can your blog posts really interesting, maybe with more images or using slide shows, up to you.
I’m looking forward to seeing more amazing work from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel